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2015-02-05 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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Hi Erine^^ I would choose a reporter. It might be fun experience to send information to others. And It is help me to know new thing that I didn't recognize. If I were a reporter I would be a entertainment reporter. I want to meet famous movie stars and celebrities. And I would take signatures from them.

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Hello once again, [이름]. This is the second homework you submitted. I understoon every sentence but there were some corrections that I made so I hope you can check them and if you have further questions, feel free to ask me during our class. See you!^.^ ~~Teacher Erine~~ Hi Erine^^ >>CorrectI would choose a reporter. >> CorrectIt might be fun experience to send information to others. >> It might be a fun experience to send or spread information to others.And It is help me to know new thing that I didn\'t recognize. >> It would also help me know new things that I didn\'t know before. If I were a reporter I would be a entertainment reporter. >> If I were a reporter, I would be an entertainment reporter.I want to meet famous movie stars and celebrities. >>CorrectAnd I would take signatures from them. >> Correct or>> I would ask for an autograph from them.

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