homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Erine^^
I would choose a reporter.
It might be fun experience to send information to others.
And It is help me to know new thing that I didn't recognize.
If I were a reporter I would be a entertainment reporter.
I want to meet famous movie stars and celebrities.
And I would take signatures from them.
강사 첨삭
Hello once again, [이름].
This is the second homework you submitted.
I understoon every sentence but there were some corrections
that I made so I hope you can
check them and if you have further questions,
feel free to ask me during our class.
See you!^.^
~~Teacher Erine~~
Hi Erine^^
>>CorrectI would choose a reporter.
>> CorrectIt might be fun experience to send information to others.
>> It might be a fun experience to send or spread information to others.And It is help me to know new thing that I didn\'t recognize.
>> It would also help me know new things that I didn\'t know before.
If I were a reporter I would be a entertainment reporter.
>> If I were a reporter, I would be an entertainment reporter.I want to meet famous movie stars and celebrities.
>>CorrectAnd I would take signatures from them.
>> Correct
or>> I would ask for an autograph from them.
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