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2015-02-05 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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Hi Erine^^ This homework asks me a creative thinking. I want to invent tea holiday. In this day we were offered coffee and tea from government. We can enjoy this day talking each other with drinking a tea. And we can receive the congratulatory money. Is it a possible to have this great holiday? ^^

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Good morning, [이름]. This is the first homework that I checked.  I will be checking the other one soon. However, there is one sentence that wasn\'t completely checked because I was a little bit confused. Please, explain it to me some other time. ~~Teacher Erine~~ Hi Erine^^ >>CorrectThis homework asks me a creative thinking.>>This homework asks me for a creative thinking.I want to invent tea holiday. >> I want to invent a tea holiday.In this day we were offered coffee and tea from government. >> On this day, we would be offered coffee and tea from...(**From go vernment is not clear for me [이름]. What do you mean by this part?)We can enjoy this day talking each other with drinking a tea. >> We can enjoy this day by talking with each other or with other people while drinking tea.And we can receive the congratulatory money. >> CorrectIs it a possible to have this great holiday? ^^ >> Is it possible to have this great holiday?

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