homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Erine^^
This homework asks me a creative thinking.
I want to invent tea holiday.
In this day we were offered coffee and tea from government.
We can enjoy this day talking each other with drinking a tea.
And we can receive the congratulatory money.
Is it a possible to have this great holiday? ^^
강사 첨삭
Good morning, [이름].
This is the first homework that I checked.
I will be checking the other one soon. However,
there is one sentence that wasn\'t completely checked because I was a little bit confused. Please, explain it to me some other time.
~~Teacher Erine~~
Hi Erine^^
>>CorrectThis homework asks me a creative thinking.>>This homework asks me for a creative thinking.I want to invent tea holiday.
>> I want to invent a tea holiday.In this day we were offered coffee and tea from government.
>> On this day, we would be offered coffee and tea from...(**From go vernment is not clear for me [이름]. What do you mean by this part?)We can enjoy this day talking each other with drinking a tea.
>> We can enjoy this day by talking with each other or with other people while drinking tea.And we can receive the congratulatory money.
>> CorrectIs it a possible to have this great holiday? ^^
>> Is it possible to have this great holiday?
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