Homework

Hello, Teacher Marie. I just came back from the English institute. Today, we talked about our past experiences and I told them about my travel which I went to Ankor Wat in Cambodia. Tomorrow, I'll tell you about this. How do movies or television influence people's behavior? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer. There are so many people who watch TV in their free time. As increasing time of watching TV, people are seriously affected by TV. For example, people want to put on their clothes like a celebrity who appears on TV. Also, they want to go some places where are introduced on TV. Nowadays, TV strongly influences people's behavior as much as it's easy to access.

Hello Kaylee! You never told me that you\'ve been to Cambodia! I\'ve always wanted to go there! You have to tell me more about that in our class. :) You were able to expresse yourself well in this composition. Your mistakes were not that serious. Great job! Please review my corrections below. Keep on polishing your writing skills and never give up. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, Teacher Marie. >> CORRECT!I just came back from the English institute. >> CORRECT!Today, we talked about our past experiences and I told them about my travel which I went to Ankor Wat in Cambodia. >> Today, we talked about our past experiences. I told them about my trip to Angkor Wat in Cambodia. Tomorrow, I\'ll tell you about this. >> CORRECT!There are so many people who watch TV in their free time. >> CORRECT!As increasing time of watching TV, people are seriously affected by TV. >> As the amount of time spent in watching TV increases, people get seriously affected by it. For example, people want to put on their clothes like a celebrity who appears on TV. >> For example, people want to wear the same clothes as the celebrities who appear on TV. OR >> For example, people want to wear the same clothes as the celebrities that they see on TV. Also, they want to go some places where are introduced on TV. >> They also want to visit places that were shown or mentioned on TV. Nowadays, TV strongly influences people\'s behavior as much as it\'s easy to access. >> Nowadays, TV strongly influences people\'s behavior because it\'s easy to access.