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2015-02-06 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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Hi there! I'm really happy that you were a pleasure to talk with me. Yeah, I'm too! I always enjoy talking to you even though it's quite hard to get up on time, wake me up and use English in a morning. hahaha I'm really enjoying! I hope you're also enjoying a conversation like me. :D See ya! <Essay> A burglary is the most common crime I think. We're not supposed to carry a weapon, so there aren't many crime of murder as America does. Instead, our economy isn't well, so it causes poor people to do that. I wish it is better soon.

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Good morning! Of course, I do enjoy talking to you.^_^ Well, we better think of more topics to talk about for us to have more enjoyable classes. Also, you have to continue talking comfortably and to give as many ideas as possible. See you on Monday! ~T. Jessie~ Hi there! >> Correct!I\'m really happy that you were a pleasure to talk with me. >> I\'m really happy that it is your pleasure to talk with me. Yeah, I\'m too! >> Correct! I always enjoy talking to you even though it\'s quite hard to get up on time, wake me up and use English in a morning. hahaha >> Correct! I\'m really enjoying! >> I\'m really enjoying it. I hope you\'re also enjoying a conversation like me. :D >> I hope you\'re also enjoying our conversation like me. :DSee ya!>> Correct! (informal) >> See you!<Essay>A burglary is the most common crime I think. >> I think burglary is the most common crime. We\'re not supposed to carry a weapon, so there aren\'t many crime of murder as America does. >> We\'re not supposed to carry a weapon, so there aren\'t many crimes of murder as America does. Instead, our economy isn\'t well, so it causes poor people to do that. >> Correct! I wish it is better soon. >> I wish it will be better soon. 

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