Homework

Hello, Teacher Marie. I appreciate your trying to encourge me. It's really helpful for me to study hard. In today's class, you seem to be confusing the state of Ta Phrom Temple because my poor pronounciation. The temple is in the middle of a natural destruction process . I heard that the temple cann't be restored any more. Anyway, below is my today's homework. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has destroyed communication among friends and family. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. I don't think that TV has ruined comminication among friends and family. What is more serious is happened due to a smartphone. We can see easily young people who concentrate on their smartphone though they are with their friends and family. Rather, TV can provide opportunities that family members gather and talk together. In my view, TV can be a sufficient role to communocate among friends and family smoothly.

Hi Kaylee! I\'m sorry if I misheard you today. I really thought you were telling me that the temple was being \'restored\'. ^^ Thank you for explaining it to me properly. You stated some good points here. I agree with what you said about smartphones. We don\'t look at each other in the eye anymore because of these damn smartphones. Anyway, please check your work for spelling and typographical mistakes. Remember, \'rather\' is an adverb so we don\'t use it in the start of a sentence. Check the difference between \'any more\' and \'anymore\' too. :) Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, Teacher Marie. >> CORRECT! I appreciate your trying to encourge me. >> I appreciate that you are trying to encourage me. OR >> I appreciate your words of encouragement. It\'s really helpful for me to study hard. >> CORRECT! In today\'s class, you seem to be confusing the state of Ta Phrom Temple because my poor pronounciation. >> In today\'s class, you seemed to have gotten confused about the state of the Ta Phrom Temple because my poor pronounciation. The temple is in the middle of a natural destruction process . >> CORRECT! I heard that the temple cann\'t be restored any more. >> CORRECT! >> any more = anymoreAnyway, below is my today\'s homework. >> Anyway, below is my homework for today.I don\'t think that TV has ruined comminication among friends and family. >> CORRECT! >> communicationWhat is more serious is happened due to a smartphone. >> What is more serious is what is happening due to smartphones. OR >> The effect of smartphones on communication is more serious. We can see easily young people who concentrate on their smartphone though they are with their friends and family. >> We usually see young people who are concentrating on their smartphone even though they are with their friends and family. Rather, TV can provide opportunities that family members gather and talk together. >> TV can somewhat provide opportunities for family members to gather and talk together. In my view, TV can be a sufficient role to communocate among friends and family smoothly. >> In my opinion, TV can play an important role in the communication among friends and family.