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2015-02-09 · 첨삭 강사 Faye

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Q : Have you done anything lately worth remembering? A : I have a special event worth remembering. On 1 January this year, I went to the mountain with my sister to see the sunrise. I haven't seen the sunrise directly before that day. But, I would like to live with the passion more and more this year, so I put a special meaning to the first day of this year and the sunrise. I think when I forget the way toward my goal, this memories remind me of the passion. I believe this new experience will help making my routine lively.

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Good Morning, [이름]! I am glad that you are happy today. I am glad that you enjoyed your weekend with friends. :) -T.Faye   Q : Have you done anything lately worth remembering?>>CORRECT:A : I have a special event worth remembering.>> I have a special event worth remembering for.On 1 January this year, I went to the mountain with my sister to see the sunrise.>>Last 1 of January this year, I went to the mountain with my sister to see the sunrise.I haven\'t seen the sunrise directly before that day.>>CORRECTBut, I would like to live with the passion more and more this year, >>CORRECTso I put a special meaning to the first day of this year and the sunrise. >>So I put a special meaning to the first day of this year and the sunrise. I think when I forget the way toward my goal, this memories remind me of the passion.>>I think when I forget the way toward my goal, this memories will reminds me of my passion.I believe this new experience will help making my routine lively. >> I believe this new experience will help me make  my routine lively.

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