homework
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An increasing number of students, year by year, across China will try to realize their dream of studying abroad.
The Voice of America began during World War II, when Germany was broad casted a radio program to get international support.
Be quick! The doors are closing! You will make it in time.
My watch went at nine o'clock, but now it has stopped.
He will be tired when we will see him tomorrow if
he's been working all night.
You are driving me crazy. Turn off the TV!
-- But I think you need a walk in the garden.
I would have come to see you earlier, but I was too busy.
I have played basketball quite well, but I haven't had time to practice it since I came to Los Angeles.
How many years have you been working at this college?
-- Well, let me see. I have started seven years ago.
This is the photo of the building which is been built. It looks great.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Wow! This is too long. kk. Anyway, I like it. kk.
Are you sure, you made this? kk. Just kidding.
I read what you wrote and it was good. Keep it up!^^
There only few corrections but please study your corrections, okay.
Good job, [이름]!
Take care always and see you! ^^
~~Teacher Kris
An increasing number of students, year by year, across China will try to realize their dream of studying abroad.>> CorrectThe Voice of America began during World War II, when Germany was broad casted a radio program to get international support.>> CorrectBe quick! The doors are closing! You will make it in time.>> CorrectMy watch went at nine o\'clock, but now it has stopped.>> CorrectHe will be tired when we will see him tomorrow ifhe\'s been working all night.>> He will be tired when we see him tomorrow if he\'s been working all night.You are driving me crazy. Turn off the TV!
>> Correct-- But I think you need a walk in the garden.>> But I think you need to walk in the garden. I would have come to see you earlier, but I was too busy.>> CorrectI have played basketball quite well, but I haven\'t had time to practice it since I came to Los Angeles.>> CorrectHow many years have you been working at this college?
>> How many years have you been working in this college?-- Well, let me see. I have started seven years ago.>> CorrectThis is the photo of the building which is been built. It looks great.
>> Correct
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