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2015-02-09 · 첨삭 강사 Faye

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What stands between you and happiness? What makes you sacrifice your happiness? ============================================================================ Responsibility and sense of duty made sacrifice my happiness. I felt happy to spending time own to me when I do something liked it. I hate been divest of my time to something didn’t expect it. Example I don’t like overtime to work. But I want to accomplish the task perfectly, often I work over time. That means, I am faced with an unexpected task, I waive my time doing something for my happiness. Sometimes, I feel that my responsibility is too much. I get the balance to hard between though important to me and my happiness.

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Good Morning, [이름]! Think about the challenges you are encountering as a tasks, you have to ovecome it, you have to finish all those tasks positively. :) Everything happens for a reason! -T.Faye   What stands between you and happiness? >>CORRECT:What makes you sacrifice your happiness? >>CORRECT:============================================================================Responsibility and sense of duty made sacrifice my happiness. >> Responsibility and sense of duty made me sacrifice my happiness.I felt happy to spending time own to me when I do something liked it. >>I feel happy in spending my own time and do something I really like.I hate been divest of my time to something didn’t expect it. >> I hate dividing my time on something I didn\'t expect.Example I don’t like overtime to work. >> Example is working overtime at work.But I want to accomplish the task perfectly, often I work over time. >>CORRECTThat means, I am faced with an unexpected task, I waive my time doing something for my happiness. >> That means, I am faced with an unexpected task, I waive my time in doing something for my happiness.Sometimes, I feel that my responsibility is too much. >> CORRECT:I get the balance to hard between though important to me and my happiness. >> I have to balance things that are important to me and my happiness.

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