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What stands between you and happiness?
What makes you sacrifice your happiness?
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Responsibility and sense of duty made sacrifice my happiness.
I felt happy to spending time own to me when I do something liked it.
I hate been divest of my time to something didn’t expect it.
Example I don’t like overtime to work.
But I want to accomplish the task perfectly, often I work over time.
That means, I am faced with an unexpected task, I waive my time doing something for my happiness.
Sometimes, I feel that my responsibility is too much.
I get the balance to hard between though important to me and my happiness.
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Good Morning, [이름]!
Think about the challenges you are encountering as a tasks,
you have to ovecome it, you have to finish all those tasks positively. :)
Everything happens for a reason!
-T.Faye
What stands between you and happiness?
>>CORRECT:What makes you sacrifice your happiness?
>>CORRECT:============================================================================Responsibility and sense of duty made sacrifice my happiness.
>> Responsibility and sense of duty made me sacrifice my happiness.I felt happy to spending time own to me when I do something liked it.
>>I feel happy in spending my own time and do something I really like.I hate been divest of my time to something didn’t expect it.
>> I hate dividing my time on something I didn\'t expect.Example I don’t like overtime to work.
>> Example is working overtime at work.But I want to accomplish the task perfectly, often I work over time.
>>CORRECTThat means, I am faced with an unexpected task, I waive my time doing something for my happiness.
>> That means, I am faced with an unexpected task, I waive my time in doing something for my happiness.Sometimes, I feel that my responsibility is too much.
>> CORRECT:I get the balance to hard between though important to me and my happiness.
>> I have to balance things that are important to me and my happiness.
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