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Have you done anything lately worth remembering?
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Lately I went to travel with my mother visited to Vietnam.
That is first time to us went to overseas together.
I made all schedule and prepared to travel about plan, hotel and anything else.
My mother really enjoyed the trip because for the first time experience self of trip without guide.
I always the fixed schedule during the trip when she changed the mind.
Also, she had some questions or offer, I resolved it instead her.
I felt like a secretary and guide to her. Sometimes I had a little pressure to satisfied to her.
But the trip was really rewarding to me.
Because, increasingly difficult, we have enough time to spending time to us.
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Good Morning!
Don\'t be too worried about things,
you have to have a positive outlook in life. :)
Take care!
-T.Faye
Have you done anything lately worth remembering?
>>CORRECT:================================================================Lately I went to travel with my mother visited to Vietnam.
>>Lately I went to travel with my mother and visited Vietnam. That is first time to us went to overseas together.
>> That is the first time we went overseas together.I made all schedule and prepared to travel about plan, hotel and anything else.
>>I cancelled all my schedule and prepared to travel.My mother really enjoyed the trip because for the first time experience self of trip without guide.
>>My mother really enjoyed the trip because for the first time she experienced a trip without a guide.I always the fixed schedule during the trip when she changed the mind.
>> I always fixed the schedule during the trip when if she changed mind.Also, she had some questions or offer, I resolved it instead her.
>> Also, she had some questions and suggestion and I make sure that I resolve it.I felt like a secretary and guide to her. Sometimes I had a little pressure to satisfied to her.
>>I feel like a secretary and her guide. Sometimes I had a little pressure in satisfying her.But the trip was really rewarding to me.
>> But the trip was really rewarding for me.Because, increasingly difficult, we have enough time to spending time to us.
>>Because, increasingly difficult, we have enough time to spending.
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