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2015-02-09 · 첨삭 강사 Faye

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What has been the greatest adventure of your life? =============================================================== Immediately, I confront with big challenge. I transfer the office before few days ago. I got the position of supervise at the Ethiopian airlines even belong to agency office in korea. (that means, I don’t belong to on staff at the Ethiopian airlines.) Whatever, I had a lot of stress that I adapt to the new surroundings. Because so far, I worked at travel agency, that worked at the airlines is new to me. I had a chance that use English and direct to my staff. I hope to get in task. Certainty, if I accomplish to my task, my career will be grew up.

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Good Morning, [이름]! Happy Monday! You did a good job, here! Thank you for accomplishing your homework. Take care! -T.Faye   What has been the greatest adventure of your life? >> CORRECT:===============================================================Immediately, I confront with big challenge. >>I immediately confront different challenges.I transfer the office before few days ago. >> I transferred office a few days ago.I got the position of supervise at the Ethiopian airlines even belong to agency office in korea. >> I got the position of supervisor at the Ethiopian airlines that\'s belong to an agency office in Korea.(that means, I don’t belong to on staff at the Ethiopian airlines.) >> (that means, I don’t belong to any staff at the Ethiopian airlines.)Whatever, I had a lot of stress that I adapt to the new surroundings. >> I am experiencing a lot of stress because I am still adapting with the new environment.Because so far, I worked at travel agency, that worked at the airlines is new to me. >> Because so far, I have worked at travel agencies but, the work in the airlines is quite new to me.I had a chance that use English and direct to my staff. >> I had a chance to used Eglish directly to my staff.I hope to get in task. >> I hope to get tasks.Certainty, if I accomplish to my task, my career will be grew up. >> Certainl, If I accomplished new task, my career will grow up.

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