HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
What has been the greatest adventure of your life?
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Immediately, I confront with big challenge.
I transfer the office before few days ago.
I got the position of supervise at the Ethiopian airlines even belong to agency office in korea.
(that means, I don’t belong to on staff at the Ethiopian airlines.)
Whatever, I had a lot of stress that I adapt to the new surroundings.
Because so far, I worked at travel agency, that worked at the airlines is new to me.
I had a chance that use English and direct to my staff.
I hope to get in task.
Certainty, if I accomplish to my task, my career will be grew up.
강사 첨삭
Good Morning, [이름]!
Happy Monday!
You did a good job, here!
Thank you for accomplishing your homework.
Take care!
-T.Faye
What has been the greatest adventure of your life?
>> CORRECT:===============================================================Immediately, I confront with big challenge.
>>I immediately confront different challenges.I transfer the office before few days ago.
>> I transferred office a few days ago.I got the position of supervise at the Ethiopian airlines even belong to agency office in korea.
>> I got the position of supervisor at the Ethiopian airlines that\'s belong to an agency office in Korea.(that means, I don’t belong to on staff at the Ethiopian airlines.)
>> (that means, I don’t belong to any staff at the Ethiopian airlines.)Whatever, I had a lot of stress that I adapt to the new surroundings.
>> I am experiencing a lot of stress because I am still adapting with the new environment.Because so far, I worked at travel agency, that worked at the airlines is new to me.
>> Because so far, I have worked at travel agencies but, the work in the airlines is quite new to me.I had a chance that use English and direct to my staff.
>> I had a chance to used Eglish directly to my staff.I hope to get in task.
>> I hope to get tasks.Certainty, if I accomplish to my task, my career will be grew up.
>> Certainl, If I accomplished new task, my career will grow up.
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