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I disagree that television has a negative effects on communusication among frends and family. Because I talk to friends abut tv which shows a variety of topic. So I can have relationship among new friends. I usually look at the tv to talk with friends very well.as well as, We have learnd many things about ethics, economics and society so we increase our acknowledge .

Hi Jiwoong! Thanks for sending this in. I have to agree with you a little bit. Talking about TV shows is actually a great ice breaker for me whenever I meet new people and even with my friends too. It\'s fun to talk about them. Thanks for sharing your thoughts on this. Be consistent with your verb tenses all throughout your essay and take note of the articles here. Please review my corrections below. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ I disagree that television has a negative effects on communusication among frends and family. >> I disagree that television has a negative effect on communication among friends and family. Because I talk to friends abut tv which shows a variety of topic. >> Because I talk to my friends about a variety of topic regarding TV shows. So I can have relationship among new friends. >> So I can have a good relationship with my new friends. I usually look at the tv to talk with friends very well. >> I usually watch TV so I can talk a lot with my friends. as well as, We have learnd many things about ethics, economics and society so we increase our acknowledge . >> Moreover, we have can learn many things about Ethics, Economics and Society through TV, so it increases our knowledge.