Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, Teacher Marie.
Thank you for your kind advice.
Whenever I listen to our concversation again, I thought that I made a mistake from basic parts.
According to your advice, I'll pay more attention to my vocabulary and grammar.
Have a nice day, Teacher.
Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
I love living in a big city.
There are so many convenience facilities which I need to use.
As a mother, it's espeically important that there are hospitals and schools in near distance.
Moreover,it has another advantage for me to go anywhere easily by subway.
Considering these aspects, I prefer city life than urgan life.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Kaylee! Thank you so much for sharing your view on this topic. You did pretty good here! Despite the spelling and typograhical errors, you showed off your incredible writing skills. Great job! Keep it up!
Kindly review my corrections below.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Hello, Teacher Marie.
>> CORRECT! Thank you for your kind advice.
>> CORRECT! Whenever I listen to our concversation again, I thought that I made a mistake from the basic parts.
>> CORRECT!
>> conversationAccording to your advice, I\'ll pay more attention to my vocabulary and grammar.
>> CORRECT! Have a nice day, Teacher.
>> CORRECT! I love living in a big city.
>> CORRECT! There are so many convenience facilities which I need to use.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> There are many convenient and necessary facilities that I can use.As a mother, it\'s espeically important that there are hospitals and schools in near distance.
>> As a mother, it\'s especially important that there are hospitals and schools nearby.
Moreover,it has another advantage for me to go anywhere easily by subway.
>> Another advantage for me is that I can go anywhere easily using the subway.
Considering these aspects, I prefer city life than urgan life.
>> CORRECT!
>> urgan = urban
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