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Hello Ms. [이름]!
Well, it is good to know that you can control yourself nowadays than before.
Doing things too much is not really good.
You just need to practice how to balance everything.
Thanks for your time today Ms. [이름] and hopefully your dog will be okay these coming days.
See you tomorrow!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
How much control do you really have over yourself?
Well. I think I can control myself quite well for now.
>> correct!
Mostly I do it when I decide to do something.
>> I mostly do it whenever I have to decide on something.
But I was not like this when I was young.
>> correct!
I normally screwed up because of laziness.
>> I normally screw up because of laziness.
After these expriences, I felt really bad and I felk like I was nothing.
>> correct! (felt)
So i tried to change myself and I worked.
>> correct!
The problem is that I am stressed out when I cant control myself.
>> correct!
I need to do something when I decide to do it no mattear what.
>> correct! (matter)
I think too much something is not also good. Right?
>> I think exerting too much effort in something is not also good right?
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