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The greatest natural disaster I has ever been in korea is flood.
>>>The greatest natural disaster I have ever experienced in Korea is flood.
Rain season has begun on july and august in korea.
>>>Rainy season begins in July and August in Korea.
There is a long rainy season.
>>>CORRECT
After the rain season is over, the heat wave began.
>>>After the rainy season is over, the heat wave begins.
These are natural phenomenon.
>>>These are natural phenomena.
But some of people are suffering for Rain season.
>>>But some people are suffering from rainy seasons.
Although a moderation of rain helps agriculture increase their crop, excessive raining is harmful for people.
>>>Although moderate raining helps agriculture increase their crop, excessive raining is harmful for people.
I watched a suffering people from flood on TV a couple of years ago.
>>>I watched suffering people from flood on TV a couple of years ago.
A lot of water enter to Some people\'s house and many cars and livestocks floated in water.
>>>A lot of water enter some people\'s houses and many cars and livestock floated in water.
The flood is the greatest catastrophe I has ever been.
>>>The flood is the greatest catastrophe I have ever been.
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