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학생이 쓴 원문
Hello Jessie!
Thank you for saying that. I hope I can say as I do in a class in an interview! Will I be able to express what I'm going to talk in an interview? I'm getting nervous as time passes. But I won't surrender!
See you!
<Essay>
My parents gave birth to me, and it makes my parents most special than anything. You were also given birth from your parents, so they're really special to you. And another thing is, my parents raise me. I owe my parents.
강사 첨삭
Good morning!
I hope you will. I think you just have to be positive. ^_^
Keep on doing your best! Fighting!
Well, our parents indeed are very special. ^_^
Let\'s enjoy this day with them. See you tmorrow!
~T. Jessie~
Hello Jessie!
>> Correct!Thank you for saying that. >> Correct!
I hope I can say as I do in a class in an interview!
>> I hope I can talk as I do in the class in the interview.
Will I be able to express what I\'m going to talk in an interview?
>> Will I be able to express what I want to say in the interview?
I\'m getting nervous as time passes.
>> Correct!
But I won\'t surrender!
>> Correct!See you!>> Correct!<Essay>My parents gave birth to me, and it makes my parents most special than anything.
>> My parents gave birth to me, and it makes my parents the most special people in my life.
You were also given birth from your parents, so they\'re really special to you.
>> Your mother gave birth to you and that makes them special to you.
And another thing is, my parents raise me. >> Correct!
I owe my parents. >> Correct!
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