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2015-02-10 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

학생이 쓴 원문

What are the things that could make you smile? Everyone knows that smiling is good for us. Even though we know about this fact well, it is hard to notice when we smile. I tried to smile all the time when I worked because I was with kids. Then why did I smile? hehe It sounds not good. Actually anything can make me smile. It is not often but I smile when I am wake. The sun shine wakes me and I feel so good. The problem is that it doesn't happen alot. hehe I really smile and laugh alot when I have English classes. My teacher makes me feel comfortable and joyful. I am enjoying her ccmpany. What else can I list? When I see delicious food, when I am with good people and puppies when I watch funny movies...an so on. There are many things that make me smile... Anything can make me smile. I just aware that it always depends on mind.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon Ms. [이름]!

As they say, laughter is the best medicine and smiling would make you feel younger.

And I would like to thank you having me one of your reasons to smile. I really appreciate it.

So keep on smiling as it will give you positive effects in your life.

May you find more reasons to smile! Thanks a bunch!

Enjoy the rest of the day!

Always.
Kathrine ^^


What are the things that could make you smile?

Everyone knows that smiling is good for us.

>> correct!
 Even though we know about this fact well, it is hard to notice when we smile.

>> correct! 
 I tried to smile all the time when I worked because I was with kids.

>> correct! 

>> or; I tried to smile all the time when I was working because I was with some kids.
 Then why did I smile? hehe

>> correct! 

 It sounds not good.

>> It does not sound good.
 Actually anything can make me smile.

>> correct! 
 It is not often but I smile when I am wake.

>> It is not often but I smile when I wake up.  
 The sun shine wakes me and I feel so good. 

>> correct! 
 The problem is that it doesn\'t happen alot. hehe

>> correct! 
 I really smile and laugh alot when I have English classes.

>> correct! 
 My teacher makes me feel comfortable and joyful.

>> correct! 
 I am enjoying her ccmpany.

>> correct!  (company)
 What else can I list?

>> What else are on my list?
 When I see delicious food, when I am with good people and puppies when I watch funny movies...an so on.
>>  When I see delicious food, when I am with good people, when I am with my puppies,  when I watch funny movies...an so on.
 There are many things that make me smile...

>> correct! 
 Anything can make me smile.

>> correct! 

I just aware that it always depends on mind.

>> I just have to be aware that it always depends on the mind.

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