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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon Ms. [이름]!
As they say, laughter is the best medicine and smiling would make you feel younger.
And I would like to thank you having me one of your reasons to smile. I really appreciate it.
So keep on smiling as it will give you positive effects in your life.
May you find more reasons to smile! Thanks a bunch!
Enjoy the rest of the day!
Always.
Kathrine ^^
What are the things that could make you smile?
Everyone knows that smiling is good for us.
>> correct!
Even though we know about this fact well, it is hard to notice when we smile.
>> correct!
I tried to smile all the time when I worked because I was with kids.
>> correct!
>> or; I tried to smile all the time when I was working because I was with some kids.
Then why did I smile? hehe
>> correct!
It sounds not good.
>> It does not sound good.
Actually anything can make me smile.
>> correct!
It is not often but I smile when I am wake.
>> It is not often but I smile when I wake up.
The sun shine wakes me and I feel so good.
>> correct!
The problem is that it doesn\'t happen alot. hehe
>> correct!
I really smile and laugh alot when I have English classes.
>> correct!
My teacher makes me feel comfortable and joyful.
>> correct!
I am enjoying her ccmpany.
>> correct! (company)
What else can I list?
>> What else are on my list?
When I see delicious food, when I am with good people and puppies when I watch funny movies...an so on.
>> When I see delicious food, when I am with good people, when I am with my puppies, when I watch funny movies...an so on.
There are many things that make me smile...
>> correct!
Anything can make me smile.
>> correct!
I just aware that it always depends on mind.
>> I just have to be aware that it always depends on the mind.
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