Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, Teahcer Marie.
I am in the library because I have a class related to my major in this afternoon.
So I'm waiting for that class doing homework you gave me.
Thank you for your words of encouragement.
Actually, I'm encouraged by your warm words.
"When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success." Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.
It's true that luck has something to do with success.
However, what is more important is the things we can do for success.
In other words, we couldn't control our luck according to our own will even though luck plays a key role.
Therefore, I think it's more effective to concentrate on what I can do.
Because hard work absolutely affects our success as well.
강사 첨삭
Hi Kaylee! You did an extraordinary job in writing this! Wow! I\'m impressed! The way you string your words together to express your thoughts -- it\'s just amazing! I can tell that you are a writer too. I\'m speechless. :) Thank you for being so diligent! Please be careful with the capitalization and check your work for typographical errors.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Hello, Teahcer Marie.
>> CORRECT! I am in the library because I have a class related to my major in this afternoon.
>> CORRECT! So I\'m waiting for that class doing homework you gave me.
>> So I\'m doing the homework that you gave me while waiting for that class.
Thank you for your words of encouragement.
>> CORRECT! Actually, I\'m encouraged by your warm words.
>> CORRECT! It\'s true that luck has something to do with success.
>> CORRECT! However, What is more important is that the things we can do for success.
>> However, what is more important is the things that we can do to be successful.
In other words, we couldn\'t control our luck according to our own will even though luck plays a key role.
>> CORRECT! Therefore, I think it\'s more effective to concentrate on what I can do.
>> CORRECT! Because hard work absolutely affects our success as well.
>> CORRECT!
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