homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Really? Oh my god! I am so proud of you, TOM!
When are you going to receive the award?
I am excited to hear about it.
What are those awards for? Did you join a contest again?
I am sure that you will have a spectacular experience with your parents abroad.
Please tell me about it tomorrow.
Always remember, Teacher Nina is proud of you.
Keep up the good work!
Teacher Nina
I will recieve two awards of thr governor of jeju.
>> I will receive two awards from the Governor of Jeju Island.
Each award has the scholarship.
>> Each award has a scholarship.
it will be almost 1500000won.
>> Did you mean: The scholarship costs about 1,500,000 won.
maybe,I will go abroad with my family to make memories.
>> Maybe I will go abroad with my family to make great memories.
>> I will travel overseas with my family to have fun memories.
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