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there are controversial issues wether success is with luck or not. But I disagree with that success is made without luck. some society can reflect needs which sociey want along period. Luck is essensial to success and a sector of skills. for example, a student studies to enter university he want to get to. To enter the university, the student will have the test to university. At that time, the day help the student do everything well like a genius.

Hi Jiwoong! Thanks for doing your homework today. However, I really didn\'t understand two of your sentences. I tried to correct them based on how I understood the essence of your essay. Please let me know what exactly do you mean by these: \"some society can reflect needs which sociey want along period.\" and \"At that time, the day help the student do everything well like a genius.\" Can you explain them to me in our class? Thank you. Kindly review my corrections below. Check your work for proper capitalization and spelling. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ there are controversial issues wether success is with luck or not. >> There is a controversy whether success is because of luck or not. But I disagree with that success is made without luck. >> I disagree that success is made without luck. some society can reflect needs which sociey want along period. >> Some society would reflect the needs of people, while others reflect the people\'s wants. Luck is essensial to success and a sector of skills. >> Luck is essential for success, along with a variety of skills. for example, a student studies to enter university he want to get to. >> For example, a student studies to enter a university that he wants to get into. To enter the university, the student will have the test to university. >> To enter the university, the student will have to take an entrance test. At that time, the day help the student do everything well like a genius. >> During this time, the student needs to study hard in order to pass the test.