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what does success mean to you?
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to me success means that i am doing what i want to do.
some people said, it is important that they have been able to earn a lot of money.
but i can be earn money loseing health is not meaningless.
It is eoungh that if we get the money to living baic life.
when i satisfiled with my life, that is really success to my life.
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what does success mean to you?
>>CORRECT:====================================to me success means that i am doing what i want to do.
>> To me success means that I am doing what I want to do.some people said, it is important that they have been able to earn a lot of money.
>>Some people say, it is important that they have been able to earn a lot of money.
but I can earn money and loseing health is not meaningless.
>>But i can be earn money being unhealth won\'t be meaningless.It is eoungh that if we get the money to living baic life.
>>It is eoungh that if we get the money to live our basic life.when i satisfiled with my life, that is really success to my life.
>>When I am satisfied with my life, that is really a success.
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