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2015-02-11 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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Hi there Jessie! Auh yeah, thank you for saying that. I hope that I can be enthusiastic enough in an interview to pass the test as I wish. What should I do if I'm quite nervous, so my brain is empty? I do want that I won't like I'm saying. I've got a relief there, then I'll do well as I've practiced. Cross your finger please! :) <Essay> A book has a power to change a person when someone reads. It has a lot of things that are worth keeping in mind and lessons. But I'm not sure that it could change whole world. Even bad people read a book no matter what they're planning.

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  Good morning [이름]! Yes! You will be. You have to think that way. Anyway,  I totally disagree with your opinion. I believe that a book can change the world. It can change people and therefore it causes things to change. But I do respect and I am glad that you shared it. Good luck on your interview! See you! ~T. Jessie~ Hi there Jessie! >> Correct!Auh yeah, thank you for saying that. >> Correct! (informal)I hope that I can be enthusiastic enough in an interview to pass the test as I wish. >> I hope that I can be enthusiatic enough in the interview to pass the test as I wish. What should I do if I\'m quite nervous, so my brain is empty? >> What should I do if I\'m quite nervous and my brain is empty? OR>> What should I do if I\'m quite nervous and I blackout? I do want that I won\'t like I\'m saying. >> Do you mean: I don\'t want that to happen. I\'ve got a relief there, then I\'ll do well as I\'ve practiced. >> If I feel comfortable, then I\'ll do well as I\'ve practiced. Cross your finger please! :)>> Correct!<Essay>A book has a power to change a person when someone reads. >> Correct! It has a lot of things that are worth keeping in mind and lessons. >> It has a lot of things like lessons that are worth keeping. But I\'m not sure that it could change whole world. >> Correct! Even bad people read a book no matter what they\'re planning. >> Correct!  

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