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Hi there Jessie!
Auh yeah, thank you for saying that. I hope that I can be enthusiastic enough in an interview to pass the test as I wish. What should I do if I'm quite nervous, so my brain is empty? I do want that I won't like I'm saying. I've got a relief there, then I'll do well as I've practiced. Cross your finger please! :)
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A book has a power to change a person when someone reads. It has a lot of things that are worth keeping in mind and lessons. But I'm not sure that it could change whole world. Even bad people read a book no matter what they're planning.
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Good morning [이름]!
Yes! You will be. You have to think that way.
Anyway, I totally disagree with your opinion.
I believe that a book can change the world.
It can change people and therefore it causes things to change.
But I do respect and I am glad that you shared it.
Good luck on your interview!
See you!
~T. Jessie~
Hi there Jessie!
>> Correct!Auh yeah, thank you for saying that.
>> Correct! (informal)I hope that I can be enthusiastic enough in an interview to pass the test as I wish.
>> I hope that I can be enthusiatic enough in the interview to pass the test as I wish.
What should I do if I\'m quite nervous, so my brain is empty?
>> What should I do if I\'m quite nervous and my brain is empty?
OR>> What should I do if I\'m quite nervous and I blackout?
I do want that I won\'t like I\'m saying.
>> Do you mean: I don\'t want that to happen.
I\'ve got a relief there, then I\'ll do well as I\'ve practiced.
>> If I feel comfortable, then I\'ll do well as I\'ve practiced.
Cross your finger please! :)>> Correct!<Essay>A book has a power to change a person when someone reads. >> Correct!
It has a lot of things that are worth keeping in mind and lessons.
>> It has a lot of things like lessons that are worth keeping.
But I\'m not sure that it could change whole world.
>> Correct!
Even bad people read a book no matter what they\'re planning.
>> Correct!
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