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2015-02-11 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello, Teacher Marie. Today, I didn't deliver my words enough because my lack of vocabulary and grammar. I'm sorry for making you be bored. After improving my English skills, I'll try again.^^ And thank you for your compliment yesterday. I was really moved. Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. I prefer to eat at restaurants. The reason is that I don't need to prepare a meal. In Korea, most wives are responsible for house chores like cooking. So eating out provides many mothers to be free from the cooking. Moreover, we can eat delicious food which we can't make easily at home when eating out.

강사 첨삭

Hi Kaylee! You didn\'t bore me today! What are you talking about? Haha! I\'m sorry if my reaction sounded like I was bored by your story. That was just my default setting and I forgot to turn it off. Haha! Once again, you just blew my mind with your writing skills! You expressed your thoughts really well here. I didn\'t even get that many corrections. Remarkable! Keep it up! Please review my corrections below. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, Teacher Marie. >> CORRECT!Today, I didn\'t deliver my words enough because my lack of vocabulary and grammar. >> Today, I didn\'t deliver my thoughts properly because of my lack of vocabulary and grammar. I\'m sorry for making you be bored. >> I\'m sorry for boring you.After improving my English skills, I\'ll try again.^^ >> CORRECT!And thank you for your compliment yesterday. >> CORRECT!I was really moved.>> CORRECT!I prefer to eat at restaurants. >> CORRECT!The reason is that I don\'t need to prepare a meal. >> CORRECT!In Korea, most wives are responsible for house chores like cooking. >> CORRECT!So eating out provides many mothers to be free from the cooking. >> So eating out gives a lot of mothers freedom from cooking.Moreover, we can eat delicious food which we can\'t make easily at home when eating out. >> CORRECT!  

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