HOMEWORK

I prefer to go to the restaurants rather than eating food at home. Some people say that eating foods in the restaurants is so bad for health because of processing of making food speedly. Although that fact is real to a degree, I indicate that they have special skills to attract people. They are specialists who have worked for decades and convinced for their cook.

Hello Jiwoong! Thank you for making your composition simpler and easier to understand. However, there\'s still something that I need you to explain to me. What do you mean by \"convinced for their cook\"? I\'m a bit confused. Please enlighten me in our class later. Kindly review my corrections below. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ I prefer to go to the restaurants rather than eating food at home. >> I prefer to go to a restaurant rather than eat food at home. Some people say that eating foods in the restaurants is so bad for health because of processing of making food speedly. >> Some people say that eating food in a restaurant is bad for our health because they were processed and made quickly. Although that fact is real to a degree, I indicate that they have special skills to attract people. >> Although that fact is real to a degree, I think they have special skills to attract people. They are specialists who have worked for decades and convinced for their cook. >> They are professionals who have been working for decades and are well-known for their food.