homework
학생이 쓴 원문
haha Long time no see.
I was busy during a few days..
I felt that i'm difficult listening. But nowadays i'm difficult speaking..
If i tell only word, I will be better. But thing tell several sentences is difficult..haha. So when i have time, I'm trying to speak like foreigners.
Hmm..Now i'll wtiteing!
Topic is How can you help someone who has no motivation?
I think that people is not haven't dream just don't know that.
So we help they seek for what they want. To find, have much time, and need to a lot of reserch. But if they don't know, they need to think their future.
And they should take around. They can see their parents,friends,and so on that believe them. Then people that haven't motivation can ce get a motivation!
강사 첨삭
Hello there my dear!
I am so glad you are now making longer sentences.
Good job! I made corrections so please go over them.
Analyze the sentences and if you have some queries. Ask them tomorrow in class.
Thanks!
~Teacher Shanee
haha Long time no see.
>>> Haha! Long time no see.I was busy during a few days..
>>> Correct!
>>> OR: I was busy for a few days.I felt that i\'m difficult listening.
>>> I felt that I\'m having a difficulty hearing.
But nowadays i\'m difficult speaking..
>>> But nowadays, I\'m having a difficulty speaking.If i tell only word, I will be better.
>>> It\'s okay with me to utter few words.
But thing tell several sentences is difficult..haha.
>>> But having a long conversation is not possible.
So when i have time, I\'m trying to speak like foreigners.
>>> So when I have time, I\'m trying to speak like a foreigner.
>>> OR: So when I have time, I practice speaking like a foreigner.Hmm..Now i\'ll wtiteing!
>>> Hmmmm....Now I\'ll be writing.Topic is How can you help someone who has no motivation?
>>> The topic is \"how can you help someione who has no motivation\".I think that people is not haven\'t dream just don\'t know that.
>>> I think that people who don\'t have any dream don\'t know that.So we help they seek for what they want.
>>> So we help them seek for what they really want.
To find, have much time, and need to a lot of reserch.
>>> To find that out, a lot of time and effort is needed.
But if they don\'t know, they need to think their future.
>>> They need to think of their future.And they should take around.
>>> And they should look around.
They can see their parents,friends,and so on that believe them.
>>> They should consider their parents, friends and other people who believe them.
Then people that haven\'t motivation can ce get a motivation!
>>> If they will do tese things, they will be motivated.
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