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Hello Shanee^^ I was realized i tell you unpolitely..ㅠㅠ But you should understnad me haha. I really wish if your praise is your real mind..^^ Of course..that is just encouragement... Ah as our english lesson develops, I feel my english sentences are crude. I'm so sad. I will try! But our final call is coming.. I get a airplane ticket to go to Australia of Mar.2.. I guess we will meet after come back... I'll miss you. By the way, today's topic is 'What is the effect of a person’s eating habits to how long he/she will live?' I heard many way to can living longly. I thimk important way is thing more less eat salinity. When you cook, Put less salt. And you should avoid drink water during your mealtime. Water which eat in mealtime can interfere with your digestion. Lastly, Prepare green food(like bell peppers, spinach, sesame) in your kitchen-table. Of course, you need to meats of moderate amounts. Then you can live during longtime. Bye~

Hi there!   I am so sad to know that you are leaving me. I hope that you won\'t stay there for a long time so we could continue learning together! Anyway, I want to thank you for accomplishing your homework. I hope that you\'ll continue being responsible.   ~Teacher Shanee   Hello Shanee^^ >>> Hello Shanee!^^I was realized i tell you unpolitely..ㅠㅠ >>> I realized that I greeted you unpolitely. But you should understnad me haha. >>> OR: But I hope you understand me. Haha!I really wish if your praise is your real mind..^^ >>> I really wish your comments are sincere and honest^^Of course..that is just encouragement... >>> Of course, they are just encouragements.Ah as our english lesson develops, I feel my english sentences are crude. >>> As we continue with our lessons, I feel that my English sentences are crude. I\'m so sad. >>> Correct! I will try! >>> Correct! >>> OR: I will do my best to improve! But our final call is coming.. >>> Correct! >>> OR: But our final class is coming.I get a airplane ticket to go to Australia of Mar.2.. >>> I got my plane ticket and I will go to Australia on March 2. I guess we will meet after come back... >>> I guess, we have to meet again after I come back to Korea. I\'ll miss you. >>> Correct!By the way, today\'s topic is \'What is the effect of a person’s eating habits to how long he/she will live?\' >>> Correct!I heard many way to can living longly. >>> I heard many ways to on how to live a longer life.I thimk important way is thing more less eat salinity. >>> I think the most important way is eating with less salt.When you cook, Put less salt. >>> Correct! [Put: put]And you should avoid drink water during your mealtime. >>> And you should avoid drinking water during your mealtime.Water which eat in mealtime can interfere with your digestion. >>> Drinking water can negatively affect your digestion.Lastly, Prepare green food(like bell peppers, spinach, sesame) in your kitchen-table. >>> Lastly, prepare vegetables like bell pepper, spinach, and sesame on your kitchen\'s table. Of course, you need to meats of moderate amounts. >>> Of course, you must control your intake of meat.Then you can live during longtime. Bye~ >>> Then, you can live a longer life. Bye!~