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Dear kaye,
This homework is difficult for me. This word communite is already knew but i didn't think how to impove my communite where i live.
Any way, I live big apartmant town there are 5,300 families. actually, my activity is only simple greeting when i meet someone who my neighbor in elevator. At the time I just say "Hi".
If i have several time each month I walk near my home and meke the greeting to my neighber when i meet someone and i ask to them about somethig.
Actually, my trying to make communite is making comversation with neighber.
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Here are the corrections I made.
This homework is difficult for me.
>>Correct!This word communite is already knew but i didn\'t think how to impove my communite where i live.
>>I already know the work \'community\' but I have never thought about how I can improve the community I belong to.Any way, I live big apartmant town there are 5,300 families.
>>Any way, I live big apartmant town where there are 5,300 families.
actually, my activity is only simple greeting when i meet someone who my neighbor in elevator.
>>My usual interaction with them is just exchanging simple greetings with any neighbor I meet in the elevator.
At the time I just say \"Hi\".
>>I usually just say \"Hi\".If i have several time each month I walk near my home and meke the greeting to my neighber when i meet someone and i ask to them about somethig.
>>If I meet them regularly, like walking by them near my home and then exchanging greetings, I ask them about something the next time.Actually, my trying to make communite is making comversation with neighber.
>>I can try improving my community by improving my communication with my neighbors.
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