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2015-02-12 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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Not every thing's perfect and they say it's all right to have regrets every once in a while. If there's any regret you have had or you are having right now, what could that be? There are many things that make me reget. Let me list them..hehe first, when I wake myself up in the morning. It is hard to wake up when I hear the arlam sound. I drag to wake up and reget why didn't I s[이름]p early last night. second, nowadays, I gained weight. I need to control eating but it is hard so I just eat first then I regret taht moment. third, when I gt angry at somebody. I know that I just endure for a second then I will be ok. but I cant stand with it. Like these, there are many things that I do and regret. We know that if we do taht we would regret but it is hard to control... that is why we are humen...right?

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon Ms. [이름]!

Well, I agree, We are just humans. We are not perfect. But of course, we should know our limitations so that we would not regret in the end.

But we learn from our mistakes anyway. kkkk

Thanks for today and enjoy your weekend!

Take care!


Always,

Kathrine ^^


Not every thing\'s perfect and they say it\'s all right to have regrets every once in a while. If there\'s any regret you have had or you are having right now, what could that be?

There are many things that make me reget.

>> There are many things which I regret.
>> or: There are many things which make me feel regretful.

 Let me list them..hehe

>> correct! 

>> or: Let me give you  a list of them. hehe
 first, when I wake myself up in the morning.

>>  correct! 

>> or: First, when I have to wake up in the morning.
 It is hard to wake up when I hear the arlam sound.

>> It is hard to wake up when I hear the alarm.
>> or: It is hard to wake up when I hear the sound of the alarm.

I drag to wake up and reget why didn\'t I s[이름]p early last night.

>> I drag myself to wake up and regret why I didn\'t s[이름]p early last night.
 second, nowadays, I gained weight.

>> Second, I am gaining weight nowadays.

I need to control eating but it is hard so I just eat first then I regret taht moment.

>> I need to control eating but it is hard so I just eat first and regret after that.
 third, when I gt angry at somebody.

>> Third, when I get angry with somebody.

 I know that I just endure for a second then I will be ok. but I cant stand with it.
>> I know that I just endure it for a second then it will be okay but I could not stand it.
Like these, there are many things that I do and regret.

>> correct!
 We know that if we do taht we would regret but it is hard to control...

>> correct!
 that is why we are humen...right?

>> correct! (human)

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