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2015-02-13 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Hello, Teacher Marie. 'Geotjeori' is row [이름]chi that is similar to a salad. I prefer row [이름]chi to mellow [이름]chi. I'm not sure that my explanation is enough. Anyway, below is my homework. Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good neighbor? Have you ever had a problem with your neighbors? Use specific details and examples in your answer. I have few opportunities to meet my neighbors since I live in an apartment. Nowadays, we often don't know our neighbors well because apartments have closed structure. It is needed to have good manners toward our neighbors although we don't know them well. For example, it's a basic decency not to make noisy after evening. We could be good neighbors if we tried to be well mannered.

강사 첨삭

Hello Kaylee! Thank you for explaining more about \'geotjeori\'. I Googled it to get additional information too. It\'s called fresh [이름]chi salad in English. Thanks for the effort. :) Please be careful with the words \'row\' and \'raw\', they might sound the same but they have different meanings. Kindly review my corrections below. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, Teacher Marie. >> CORRECT!\'Geotjeori\' is row [이름]chi that is similar to a salad. >> CORRECT! >> row = rawI prefer row [이름]chi to mellow [이름]chi. >> I prefer raw [이름]chi to fermented [이름]chi. I\'m not sure that my explanation is enough. >> CORRECT! >> that = ifAnyway, below is my homework. >> CORRECT!I have few opportunities to meet my neighbors since I live in an apartment. >> CORRECT!Nowadays, we often don\'t know our neighbors well because apartments have closed structure. >> CORRECT!It is needed to have good manners toward our neighbors although we don\'t know them well. >> We need to have good manners towards our neighbors although we don\'t know them well.For example, it\'s a basic decency not to make noisy after evening. >> For example. it\'s basic decorum not to make noise in the evening. We could be good neighbors if we tried to be well mannered. >> CORRECT! >> well mannered = well-mannered  

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