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2015-02-13 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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I think that a good neighbor did not give any demage to each other. When I was in elementary school in the countryside, my family had a good relationship with neighbor next to my house. We raised two dogs as pet and either the neighbor did. One day my pets got out entrance to neighbor's house and then fought each other for feed. There was one death of my pets fighting with. We talked to neighbor about fault or justice, the problem was getting bigger. There we had bad relationship with one.

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Hello Jiwoong! You gave a very good example here based on your experience. I feel bad that neighbors would often have arguments and misunderstandings just because of their pets. This kind of situation happens all the time and it\'s a little bit petty, in my opinion. Thanks for sharing! Kindly review the corrections below. Please be careful with your spelling. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ I think that a good neighbor did not give any demage to each other. >> I think that a good neighbor should not cause any harm to his/her neighbor. When I was in elementary school in the countryside, my family had a good relationship with neighbor next to my house. >> When I was in elementary, in the countryside, my family had a good relationship with our next-door neighbor. We raised two dogs as pet and either the neighbor did. >> We raised two dogs and our neighbors had their own dogs too. OR >> My neighbors and my family both raised dogs. One day my pets got out entrance to neighbor\'s house and then fought each other for feed. >> One day, my pets got out and entered our neighbor\'s house and then fought with their dogs. There was one death of my pets fighting with. >> One of our pets died because of that scuffle. We talked to neighbor about fault or justice, the problem was getting bigger. >> We talked to our neighbor about whose fault was it, but the problem just got bigger.There we had bad relationship with one. >> From then on, we had a bad relationship with them.  

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