homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Wow! That is a big amount of money!
Congratulations TOM! You deserve it!
You studied hard to achieve what you want.
Keep up the good work! I am so proud of you.
Just keep on dreaming. Don\'t be sad if you can\'t travel overseas at this time.
You can go there once you are already very successful.
Congratulations to your parents too. ^^
Teacher Nina
THE MONEY THAT GOVERMENT GAVE ME IS VERY EXPENCIVE.
>> Did you mean: The government gave me a big amount of money.
iT IS 750000WON!!!
>> It is 750,000 won.
>> It is seven hundred fifty thousand won.
i WILL BUT FOOD,BOOKS AND ALSO CORALS.
>> I will buy food, books and also corals.
>> I will buy various kinds of food, books and also corals.
i WANT TO GO ABROAD BUT i CAN\'T.
>> I want to go abroad but I can\'t.
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