homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Do you think criminals can change? Why or why not?
In my oppinions, a few of criminals can change.
Even if they sincerely repent and regret, because ordinary people has negative prejudices and preconceptions about them, it is not easy to mingle with the other people for them. So, it is difficult that they have economically independent life.
Poverty creates a vicious cycle that links to a new crime for a living.
if the more people help their independence, more and more criminals will be able to change.
강사 첨삭
Good morning!
Thanks for sharing your opinion.
I agree that poverty can cause crimes but I think some people just make that as a reason.
I believe that our actions are our choices. If we choose not to do something then we wouldn\'t do it.
Well, I\'ll see you later Ms. [이름]!
~T. Jessie~
Do you think criminals can change? Why or why not?In my oppinions, a few of criminals can change.
>> In my opinion, a few criminals can change.Even if they sincerely repent and regret, because ordinary people has negative prejudices and preconceptions about them, it is not easy to mingle with the other people for them.
>> Even if they sincerely repent and regret, because ordinary people have negative prejudices and preconceptions about them, it won\'t be easy for them to mingle with other people.
So, it is difficult that they have economically independent life.
>> Correct!Poverty creates a vicious cycle that links to a new crime for a living.
>> Correct!if the more people help their independence, more and more criminals will be able to change. >> If more people will help them be independent, more and more criminals can be changed.
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