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2015-02-13 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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For a new weekend! haha Wow, I was really happy that I could tell you a lot of good news. There wasn't any interesting new like it during pre-time, wasn't it? As the end of vacation is getting closer, some events are happening. But I wish it is January! :'( Of course I know that it can't... Time really really flies too fast as you say. Let's enjoy every moment! <Essay> Of course they can change, although it's not huge possibiliy. They're also human. Whatever they did, they can feel guilty but they can't just realize what they did now. If we keep giving attention to change them, they'll be changed.

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Good morning! Yes! Yesterday was full of good news and today, we also had another good news. ^_^ You\'re blessed! Anyway, thanks for sharing your opinion. Enjoy your weekend and let\'s talk again tomorrow.See  you! ~T. Jessie~ Of course they can change, although it\'s not huge possibiliy. For a new weekend! haha >> Correct!Wow, I was really happy that I could tell you a lot of good news. >> Correct! There wasn\'t any interesting new like it during pre-time, wasn\'t it? >> There hasn\'t been any interesting news like those before, right? As the end of vacation is getting closer, some events are happening. >> Correct!But I wish it is January! :\'( >> But I wish it is still January! :\'( Of course I know that it can\'t... >> Of course I know that it can\'t be... Time really really flies too fast as you say. >>  Time really really flies too fast as you said. Let\'s enjoy every moment!>> Correct!<Essay>Of course they can change, although it\'s not huge possibiliy. >> Of course they can change, although it\'s not possible to all. They\'re also human. >> Correct!Whatever they did, they can feel guilty but they can\'t just realize what they did now. >> Whatever they did, they feel guilty about it but they don\'t just realize what they did now. If we keep giving attention to change them, they\'ll be changed. >> Correct!

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