Homework

Hello, Teacher Marie. Thanky you for today's kind teaching. I learned some useful expression. Next time, I'll try these expressions to our conversation.^^ In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this is a good idea? Support your opinion by using specific reasons and details. Whether having jobs for teenagers is good depends on their countries' situations. In Korea, many people believe that students ought to study in their school days. It's true that a lot of teenagers have their jobs for a living. Except these cases, it is not considered desireable that they have jobs ignoring their studies. Intense competition of university entrance examinations does not allow for teenagers to have jobs although it provides for them abundant experiences.

Hi Kaylee! I\'m looking forward to hear you use those expressions in our future classes. Thanks for always taking some time to read my evaluations. It means a lot to me. :) You did very well in sharing your thoughts on this topic. I just need you to check the sentence structure, spelling and the proper use of punctuation marks here. Keep it up! Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, Teacher Marie. >> CORRECT! Thank you for today\'s kind teaching. >> CORRECT! I learned some useful expression. >> CORRECT! Next time, I\'ll try these expressions to our conversation.^^ >> CORRECT! >> to = duringWhether having jobs for teenagers is good depends on their countries\' situations. >> Whether or not teenagers having jobs is good depends on their countries\' situation.In Korea, many people believe that students ought to study in their school days. >> CORRECT! It\'s true that a lot of teenagers have their jobs for a living. >> It\'s true that a lot of teenagers have jobs to earn a living. Except these cases, it is not considered desireable that they have jobs ignoring their studies. >> Except for these cases, it is not considered ideal for them to have jobs and ignore their studies. Intense competition of university entrance examinations does not allow for teenagers to have jobs although it provides for them abundant experiences. >> Intense competition in the university entrance examination does not allow teenagers to have jobs, although it would provide them with abundant experiences.