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2015-02-16 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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Hi Erine^^ This is my late homework. I am shy to say my personal success. My original major is not a nursing. I studied Korean language and literature. Actually I wanted to be a writer or editor. But I changed my major to nursing. I reentered to the nursing university and to be a nurse. Now, I have been working for 5 years In the hospital as a nurse. If I would not change my major, what would my life is to be.. Sometimes I wonder... usually...

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]! Thank you for telling me about your major. You don\'t have to be ashamed about it. I am more proud of people who change their major and pursue what they think is right for them. See you later. ~~Teacher Erine~~ Hi Erine^^ >> CorrectThis is my late homework. >> CorrectI am shy to say my personal success. >> I am shy to say about my personal success.My original major is not a nursing. >> My first major is not nursing.I studied Korean language and literature. >>CorrectActually I wanted to be a writer or editor. >>Actually, I wanted to be a writer or an editor.But I changed my major to nursing. >>But I changed my major into nursing.I reentered to the nursing university and to be a nurse. >> I entered a nuersing university to be a nurse.Now, I have been working for 5 years In the hospital as a nurse. >> Now, I have been working in hospital as a nurse for five years.If I would not change my major, what would my life is to be..>> If I hadn\'t changed my major, I can\'t imagine what my life would have been.Sometimes I wonder... usually... >> I usually wonder about it.

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