homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Erine^^
This is my late homework.
I am shy to say my personal success.
My original major is not a nursing.
I studied Korean language and literature. Actually I wanted to be a writer or editor.
But I changed my major to nursing. I reentered to the nursing university and to be a nurse.
Now, I have been working for 5 years In the hospital as a nurse.
If I would not change my major, what would my life is to be..
Sometimes I wonder... usually...
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
Thank you for telling me about your major.
You don\'t have to be ashamed about it.
I am more proud of people who change their major and
pursue what they think is right for them.
See you later.
~~Teacher Erine~~
Hi Erine^^
>> CorrectThis is my late homework.
>> CorrectI am shy to say my personal success.
>> I am shy to say about my personal success.My original major is not a nursing.
>> My first major is not nursing.I studied Korean language and literature.
>>CorrectActually I wanted to be a writer or editor.
>>Actually, I wanted to be a writer or an editor.But I changed my major to nursing.
>>But I changed my major into nursing.I reentered to the nursing university and to be a nurse.
>> I entered a nuersing university to be a nurse.Now, I have been working for 5 years In the hospital as a nurse.
>> Now, I have been working in hospital as a nurse for five years.If I would not change my major, what would my life is to be..>> If I hadn\'t changed my major, I can\'t imagine what my life would have been.Sometimes I wonder... usually...
>> I usually wonder about it.
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