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2015-02-16 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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There is no homework today. so, let me introduce my hometown. My hometown is located in kangwon Provice, South korea. Its name is 'chun-cheon city.' Chun-cheon city is very foamous for scenery. Beatiful river, fresh air and wide lake etc. Specially, this city has the nickname because of wide lake. Nickname is 'a lake city'. There is a lot of fog in the early morning. I can't watch under my nose and can't drive. That's it today. i will introduce my hometown later. Bye hh

강사 첨삭

Hello there, [이름]!!!

I do hope that you\'ll continue to learn and practice English.

Thank you for sending an essay about your hometown.

I wish that you\'ll enjoy your holiday with your family!!!

God Bless!!!

T. Jeny

 

There is no homework today.

>>correct
so, let me introduce my hometown.
>>Let me introduce my hometown.
My hometown is located in kangwon Provice, South korea.

>>My hometown is located in Kangwon Province, South Korea.
Its name is \'chun-cheon city.\'

>>It\'s name is \'Chun-Cheon City.\'
Chun-cheon city is very foamous for scenery.

>>Chun-cheon city is known for it\'s beautiful scenery.
Beatiful river, fresh air and wide lake etc.

>>Beautiful river, fresh air, wide lake and etc.
Specially, this city has the nickname because of wide lake. Nickname is \'a lake city\'.
>>My city known as \"lake city,\" because of the wide lake.

There is a lot of fog in the early morning.

>>It is also very foggy in the morning.
I can\'t watch under my nose and can\'t drive.

>>It\'s quite difficult to drive because of the fog.
That\'s it today. i will introduce my hometown later.

>>That\'s it for today, I will introduce my hometown next time.
Bye hh

>>Bye!!!

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