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Hello there, [이름]!!!
I do hope that you\'ll continue to learn and practice English.
Thank you for sending an essay about your hometown.
I wish that you\'ll enjoy your holiday with your family!!!
God Bless!!!
T. Jeny
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>>correct
so, let me introduce my hometown.
>>Let me introduce my hometown.
My hometown is located in kangwon Provice, South korea.
>>My hometown is located in Kangwon Province, South Korea.
Its name is \'chun-cheon city.\'
>>It\'s name is \'Chun-Cheon City.\'
Chun-cheon city is very foamous for scenery.
>>Chun-cheon city is known for it\'s beautiful scenery.
Beatiful river, fresh air and wide lake etc.
>>Beautiful river, fresh air, wide lake and etc.
Specially, this city has the nickname because of wide lake. Nickname is \'a lake city\'.
>>My city known as \"lake city,\" because of the wide lake.
There is a lot of fog in the early morning.
>>It is also very foggy in the morning.
I can\'t watch under my nose and can\'t drive.
>>It\'s quite difficult to drive because of the fog.
That\'s it today. i will introduce my hometown later.
>>That\'s it for today, I will introduce my hometown next time.
Bye hh
>>Bye!!!
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