Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there!
Thanks for writing another composition.
Well, that is for your pronunciation to improve so I hope you\'ll practice.
That is the reason why it is called tongue twisters. I can read it.
And I know that you can also do it. First, try to read it slowly and you have to make sure that you will pronounce it clearly.
You can do that! See you tomorrow!
~T. Jessie~
Wow, it is quite hard to pronunce.
>> Correct!
Can you pronounce it naturally?
>> Correct!
Of course I believe you can... maybe not?
>> Correct!
I think that native speakers also feels hard to these pronunciation.
>> I think that native speakers also have difficulty pronouncing it.
My tongue is twisted when I pronounce.
>> Correct!
Will I be a person who pronunciation is good when I pronounce it easily?
>> Will my pronunciation improve if I can pronounce it easily?
I want to hear how you pronounce it a little.
>> Correct!
See ya!
>> Correct! (informal)
>> See you!
<Composition>
My best trip is that I went to an amusemnet park and a water park with mmy high school friends.
>> My best trip is when I went to an amusement park and a water park with my high school friends.
It was a first trip after I\'m an adult, so we bought some beers even though it was violation of regulations in an inn. kkk
>> It was my first trip as an adult, so we bought some beers even though we were violating the regulations of the inn. kkk
I enjoyed my adult life.
>> Correct!We had no lots of restrictions because we were not an adolescent.
>> We had a few restrictions because we were not adolescents.
I felt quite free.
>> Correct!Of course we enjoyed swimming and goning on rides.
>> Of course we enjoyed swimming and going on rides.
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