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2015-02-16 · 첨삭 강사 Sarah

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1. I want to see the National Theater's presentation of Arthur Miller's 'The Last Yankee'. 2. Are you interested in the latest developments in technology? 3. She is a very determined woman. 4. There is friendly rivalry between the two teams. 5. Is it your final decision ? Hi Sarah, I would like to talk about the beheadings of Egyption christians occured by ISIS. Here's the link below. http://edition.cnn.com/2015/02/15/middleeast/isis-video-beheadings-christians/index.html Have a nice day :)

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름],

I will look into the link and we\'ll discuss about it

later tonight in our class. Thanks! :)

Teacher Sarah

1. I want to see the National Theater\'s presentation of Arthur Miller\'s \'The Last Yankee\'.

>> CORRECT
2. Are you interested in the latest developments in technology?

>> CORRECT
3. She is a very determined woman.

>> CORRECT
4. There is friendly rivalry between the two teams.

>> CORRECT
5. Is it your final decision ?

>> CORRECT

Hi Sarah,
I would like to talk about the beheadings of Egyption christians occured by ISIS.
Here\'s the link below.
http://edition.cnn.com/2015/02/15/middleeast/isis-video-beheadings-christians/index.html
Have a nice day :)

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