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2015-02-16 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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Good afternoon Jessie~ I'm really comfortable when we are talking. Don't worry. I love it. haha. I heard that your lunar new year's day is called a Chinese new year's day. So are you enjoying and celebrating the New Year like us? And I also heard that people eat a red and round shaped fruits. Is it rumor or true? I really wonder :) Our homework. 1. Do you have sister? -> Do you have a sister? 2. When you come to Germany? -Last year. -> When did you come to Germany? 3. When you return to Japan? -Next year. -> When do you return to Japan? 4. You like German food? - Not very much. -> Do you like German food? 5. She got up and run to the door.->She got up and ran to the door

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Good afternoon [이름]! Thanks for this composition. Yes, we call it Chinese New Year. We actually don\'t celebrate on this day. We consider January one as our New Year. But then, one of the beliefs here in the Philippines is having round fruits on the table on New Year. I actually don\'t do this. I don\'t believe it so I don\'t know what\'s the reasong behind it. ^_^ Anyway, wow, you know something about our coutnry. How did you know about it? See you tomorrow! ~T. Jessie~ Good afternoon Jessie~>> Correct!I\'m really comfortable when we are talking. >> Correct! Don\'t worry. >> Correct! I love it. haha. >> Correct!I heard that your lunar new year\'s day is called a Chinese new year\'s day. >> I heard that your lunar new year\'s day is called  Chinese new year\'s day. So are you enjoying and celebrating the New Year like us? >> Correct!And I also heard that people eat a red and round shaped fruits. >> And I also heard that people eat red and round shaped fruits. Is it rumor or true? >> Is it a rumor or is it true? I really wonder :)>> Correct!Our homework.1. Do you have sister? -> Do you have a sister? >> Correct!2. When you come to Germany? -Last year. -> When did you come to Germany? >> Correct!3. When you return to Japan? -Next year. -> When do you return to Japan? >> When will you return to Japan?4. You like German food? - Not very much. -> Do you like German food? >> Correct!5. She got up and run to the door.->She got up and ran to the door >> Correct!

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