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2015-02-17 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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It has often been said, “a little knowledge is a dangerous thing.” Do you agree? Why or why not? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer. In my case, I agree that "a little knowledge is a dangerous thing.” It's because a little knowledge supposes to make a mistake. For example, people know that mushrooms are healthy foods but there are some poisonous mushrooms also. Therefore, if they don't know which mushrooms are toadstools, eating a mushroom can be dangerous. So, a little knowledge can cause a dangerous result.

강사 첨삭

Good morning, Reina!^.^ I appreciate your ideas and they are very clear to understand. Keep on working on your vocabulary, though. Some words may be used correctly but other words can explain your ideas but are not really used properly. Be careful with the sentence patterns while you are using these words. Take care!^.^ ~~Teacher Erine~~ It has often been said, “a little knowledge is a dangerous thing.”Do you agree? Why or why not? Use specific reasons andexamples to explain your answer.In my case, I agree that \"a little knowledge is a dangerous thing.” >> In my case, I agree with the proverb/saying.It\'s because a little knowledge supposes to make a mistake. >> It\'s because a little knowledge indicates making a mistake. For example, people know that mushrooms are healthy foods but there are somepoisonous mushrooms also. >> For example, people know that mushroom can be healthy or poisonous. Therefore, if they don\'t know which mushrooms are toadstools, eating a mushroom can be dangerous. >> Correct.So, a little knowledge can cause a dangerous result. >> Correct

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