homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Erine^^
fist, I am so sorry.
I was very tired when you called.
I should have canceled class. I made you embarrassed.
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I think that the use of seatblets is one of duties that we must keep
Because we should protect ourselves and also other person.
Traffic accident is very dangerous to all.
Using a seatbelts is good acting not only my safety but also the other's
As a result, It should be mandatory by law.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
I am sorry if I checked your homework a little late.
The corrections that I made need to be checked by you
because I think you have to read your sentences again. I think the
ideas that you wrote were the same.
Try to avoid repitition because it isn\'t good in writing.
See you!
~~Teacher Erine~~
Hi Erine^^
>> Correct.fist, I am so sorry.
>> First of all, I am so sorry.I was very tired when you called.
>> CorrectI should have canceled class. I made you embarrassed. >> I should have canceled the class. I made you embarrass.I think that the use of seatblets is one of duties that we must keep
>> I think that the use of seatbelts is one of our duties we must keep.Because we should protect ourselves and also other person..
>> Because we should protect ourselves and other people.Traffic accident is very dangerous to all.
>> Traffic accidents is the most dangerous of all.Using a seatbelts is good acting not only my safety but also the other\'s
>> Using seatbelts is a good act not only for my safety but for other\'s as well.As a result, It should be mandatory by law.
>> As a result, it should be mandated by the law.
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