Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, Teacher Marie.
Today is the first day of these holidays.
I wonder you are doing well.
Happy Holidays.
Make a sentence or give an example situation using the following idioms:
1. (To be) Up in the air
2. (To) Stab someone in the back
3. (To) Lose your touch
There is a bad news for [이름] Jun Ho who is a famous comedian.
Recently his coworker stabbed him in the back so that he has suffered from heavy losses.
Whether or not he accuses his coworker of fraud is up in the air.
A lot of his fans are worried about losing his touch due to a grief.
They await prompt resolution of this matter.
강사 첨삭
Hi Kaylee! I\'m feeling better now. Thank you for your concern. :) I had enough rest during the long holiday. By the way, we usually say \"happy holidays\" only during Christmas. We refer to Christmas as \'the holidays\'. Any other holiday, like the Lunar New Year or Thanksgiving Day, even though it goes on for two or three days, we just say \'holiday\'. So you can just say \'have a happy holiday\' or \'enjoy the long holiday\' instead. Great job in making a little \'story\' while using the three idioms that I gave you. Keep it up! ^^
Please review my corrections below.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Hello, Teacher Marie.
>> CORRECT! Today is the first day of these holidays.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Today is the first day of the long holiday. - betterI wonder you are doing well.
>> I wonder if you are doing well.
Happy Holidays.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Have a happy holiday.There is a bad news for [이름] Jun Ho who is a famous comedian.
>> CORRECT! Recently his coworker stabbed him in the back so that he has suffered from heavy losses.
>> Recently, his coworker stabbed him in the back so he suffered a heavy loss.
Whether or not he accuses his coworker of fraud is up in the air.
>> CORRECT! A lot of his fans are worried about losing his touch due to a grief.
>> A lot of his fans are worried about him losing his touch due to grief.They await prompt resolution of this matter.
>> They await the prompt resolution of this matter.
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