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Good afternoon Ms. [이름]!
I am happy to hear that you had an enjoyable time during the holiday.
And I am pretty sure that you ate a lot of these foods you mentioned during the holiday. Did you? haha
No need to worry about your diet as long as you were satisfied with all of it. kkk.
Good luck for today!
Have a nice day too! Take care!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
What holiday food do you like?
There are various holiday(new year day) food in Korea.
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Jeolooks like small pizza, Jabchae is kind of noddles, Bugogi, some trditional snacks, food with stick etc.
>> Jeon looks like a small pizza, Jabchae is a kind of a noodle, Bulgogi, some traditional snacks, some foods in a stick, etc.
Korean women have a hard time to make food that is why many people who are married fight alot during these days.
>> Korean women are having a hard time making food that is why many married people are fighting a lo during these days.
Anyway, my favorite food is bugogi but I can eat bugogi any time.
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So, I want to choose Jeon as holiday food.
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I can not eat jeon any time.
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It is a specil food because it take time to make it.
>> It is a special food because it takes time to make it.
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