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2015-02-24 · 첨삭 강사 Sophia

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I haven't experience a long trip yetㅠㅠ! I want go to the disneyland in U.S.A. I will go disneyland by airplane. But I scary airplane^*^!!

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Hello [이름], I am sorry to hear that you haven\'t experienced going to a trip yet. I guess, going to Disneyland in the United States is a good place to visit. I like going to the amusement park too. Don\'t you have amusement parks in Korea? Lote World and Everland are good places to visit but visiting Disneyland is better. Anyway, thank you for doing your homework. Talk to you in class. Teacher Sophia Here are your corrections: I haven\'t experience a long trip yetㅠㅠ! >> I haven\'t experienced a long trip yet. I want go to the disneyland in U.S.A. >> I want to go to Disneyland in the United States.I will go disneyland by airplane. But I scary airplane^*^!! >> I will ride on an airplane to go to Disneyland but I feel scared.

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