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Hi Erine^^ Are your days going well? My normal days are pretty well. It is difficult for me to make a sentence. During composition, It is hard to have English way of thinking. ------------------------- One of the ways is for new student to adjust new environment to make a guide who is enrolled student. Another way is to recommend for new comers join a club which is existed in school. Making a new friend is a good way to recover awkward situation. I think school can help it. ------------------------ See you soon^^

Hello, [이름]! Writing a composition can help you contstruct sentences and use more grammar patterns. It can also enhance you to use more expressions and idioms to express your ideas more. Try to read the corrections so you can learn from the grammatical errors and for you to use the same sentence patterns again. Take care and see you in class.^.^ ~~Teacher Erine~~ Hi Erine^^ >> CorrectAre your days going well? My normal days are pretty well. >> CorrectIt is difficult for me to make a sentence. >>CorrectDuring composition, It is hard to have English way of thinking. >> While writing my compositions, it is hard to think in English. One of the ways is for new student to adjust new environment to make a guide who is enrolled student. >> One of the ways for new students to adjust in a new environment is to be guided.Another way is to recommend for new comers join a club which is existed in school. >> Another way is to recommend new comers to join a club existing in school.Making a new friend is a good way to recover awkward situation. >> Making a new friend is a good way to recover from an awkward situation.I think school can help it. >> I think school can make it happen.See you soon^^ >> Correct