Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Well, I'll check what you notice me. I just looked around and I found out it's quite interesting. I really appreciate your favor to teach me no matter how you can. I'm sure that it's really interesting, so I'll read this after a class. haha Really! Actually I read this late, so I found it late. Anyway, thanks for your favor again, take care.
<Essay>
I don't try many things to maintain my appearance. I apply a lotion and a toner after bath like others. And I trim my hair before going out. That's all. Ah, of course I think a moment to choose my cloth for every time I go out. But you take lots of time for making up, don't you? Like normal women. haha
강사 첨삭
Hello there!
Okay, no problem. I trust you. Don\'t worry. ^_^
I understand that you are getting busier these days.
Anyway, I think I\'m not a normal woman then. Hahaha.
It actually depends on my mood, the occassion and the time.
Let\'s just talk then tomorrow. See you!
~T. Jessie~
Well, I\'ll check what you notice me.
>> Correct!
I just looked around and I found out it\'s quite interesting.
>> Correct!
OR>> I just scanned at it and I found out that it\'s quite interesting.
I really appreciate your favor to teach me no matter how you can.
>> I really appreciate your effort to teach me as much as you can.
I\'m sure that it\'s really interesting, so I\'ll read this after a class. haha
>> Correct!
Really!
>> Correct!
Actually I read this late, so I found it late.
>> Correct!
Anyway, thanks for your favor again, take care.
>> Correct!<Essay>I don\'t try many things to maintain my appearance.
>> Correct!
I apply a lotion and a toner after bath like others.
>> I apply lotion and toner after taking a bath like others.
And I trim my hair before going out.
>> Correct!
That\'s all.
>> Correct!
Ah, of course I think a moment to choose my cloth for every time I go out.
>> Ah, of course I think for a moment to choose my clothes every time I go out.
But you take lots of time for making up, don\'t you?
>> But you take lots of time to put on some make up, son\'t you?
Like normal women. haha
>> Correct!
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