homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Erine^^
Your homework always gives me worry and let me think.^^
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I didn't know the English speaking world emphasis to read 'old'
I only know Korea do it.
It has nothing to do with nations.
I think that why every nation let us read "old'
Classic has a wisdom of ancestors.
We can learn the solution of problems via classic.
Actually, The world is rolling and rolling.
강사 첨삭
Good morning, [이름]!
What made you say that my homework for you
gives you worries? Is it something negative?
Is it very hard? Tell me so that I can change them or not.
Tell me so in class.^.^
See you!~~~Teacher Erine~~
Hi Erine^^
>> CorrectYour homework always gives me worry and let me think.^^
>> Your homework always gives me worries and let me think.I didn\'t know the English speaking world emphasis to read \'old\'
>> I didn\'t know English world empahisizes reading \"old\" textbooks.I only know Korea do it.
>>CorrectIt has nothing to do with nations.
>> It has nothing to do with the nations.I think that why every nation let us read \"old\' Classic has a wisdom of ancestors.
>> I think the reason why every nation lets us read \"old\" textbooks is because classical time has wisdom from ancestors. We can learn the solution of problems via classic.
>> We can learn the solution of problems via classical times.Actually, The world is rolling and rolling.
>> Correct
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