Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good morning!
Thanks for sharing this.
I haven\'t heard about it but I will be reading about it later.
I really hope we can create technologies that will help us in the future.
Enjoy your weekend!
~T. Jessie~
A superb Jessie! haha
>> Correct!
I\'m also really glad that you\'re glad to what I talked to you, the good news.
>> I\'m also really glad that you\'re glad to hear about what I told you, the good news.
I always hope that I can tell only good news.
>> Correct!
But how can we expect what will happen today or tomorrow.
>> Correct!
What only we can do is just to pray for the good new happen.
>> What we can only do is to pray for good things to happen.
Let\'s pray for good news together! :)
>> Correct!
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The most ideal way is to reuse water that we used last time by purifying.
Many scientists are trying to make machines to purify water.
>> Correct!A few days ago, I heard that Google? Apple? made a self-purifying shower booth, so we can save money as well as water.
>> Correct!
I wish that devices like that are developed and released soon.
>> I wish that devices like that will be developed and released soon.
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