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Hi Erine^^ It comes spring in Korea. The weather is warmer and warmer. I expect new season and I hope everthing will be alright. ---------------------------------------- Parents should be a child’s disciplinarian and should be a child’s best friend. I know it is hard to exist both. But we can't emphasis only one. Because child need both Child sometimes do not make decision and they sometimes make mistake. They need to have a helper. Parents should be good helper. I think that the good role of parents is to show gentle and strictness to them

  Hello and happ Monday, [이름]! Here are the corrections that I made in your composition. If you have further questions, feel free to ask me. I hope you can find time to read the corrections. See you later! ~~Teacher Erine~~ Hi Erine^^>> Correct It comes spring in Korea. >> Spring has come in Korea.The weather is warmer and warmer. >> The weather is getting warmer and warmer.I expect new season and I hope everthing will be alright.>> I am expecting for the new season and hoping everything will be alright. Parents should be a child’s disciplinarian and should be a child’s best friend.>> Parents should be child\'s disciplinarians and best friends. I know it is hard to exist both. >> I know it is hard to make both exist.But we can\'t emphasis only one. >> But we can\'t emphasize only one.Because child need both >> Because a child needs both.Child sometimes do not make decision and they sometimes make mistake.>> A child does not make decisions and make mistakes. They need to have a helper. >> They need to have a helper. Parents should be good helper. >> Parents should be good helpers.I think that the good role of parents is to show gentle and strictness to them >> I think that as a good role model, parents should show gentleness and strictness to their children.