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Hello!
You're totally right. I also have some fears about that I speak strangely. This fears make me hard to approach foreigners to get a relationship with them. But it is the best way to improve my skill... There's nothing easy. So I hope that the conversations with you help me a lot for these things.
Take care!
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There aren't a lot of practice classes. I said it before, didn't I? I learned only theories in a school. It's not that useful in a daily life and in an university to study. So I think that we could get more chances to practice.
강사 첨삭
Good morning!
That\'s what I like about you.
You know that you should do something even if you don\'t want to.
That fear will later on vanish.
Oh I remember! Thanks for reminding me.
Well, I do hope your government can do something about it.
See you tomorrow!
~T. Jessie~
Hello!
>> Correct!You\'re totally right. >> Correct!
I also have some fears about that I speak strangely.
>> I also have some fears about speaking strangely.
This fears make me hard to approach foreigners to get a relationship with them.
>> These fears make me have difficulty approaching foreigners to start a relationship with them.
But it is the best way to improve my skill... >> Correct!
There\'s nothing easy. >> Correct!
So I hope that the conversations with you help me a lot for these things.
>> So I hope that the conversations with you will help me a lot these things.
Take care!>> Correct!<Essay>There aren\'t a lot of practice classes.
>> Correct!
I said it before, didn\'t I?
>> Correct!
I learned only theories in a school. >> I only learned theories in a school.
It\'s not that useful in a daily life and in an university to study.
>> Do you mean: It\'s not that useful in our daily lives and in a university to study.
So I think that we could get more chances to practice.
>> So I think that we should get more chances to practice.
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