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2015-03-02 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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Hello! You're totally right. I also have some fears about that I speak strangely. This fears make me hard to approach foreigners to get a relationship with them. But it is the best way to improve my skill... There's nothing easy. So I hope that the conversations with you help me a lot for these things. Take care! <Essay> There aren't a lot of practice classes. I said it before, didn't I? I learned only theories in a school. It's not that useful in a daily life and in an university to study. So I think that we could get more chances to practice.

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Good morning! That\'s what I like about you. You know that you should do something even if you don\'t want to. That fear will later on vanish. Oh I remember! Thanks for reminding me. Well, I do hope your government can do something about it. See you tomorrow! ~T. Jessie~ Hello! >> Correct!You\'re totally right. >> Correct! I also have some fears about that I speak strangely. >> I also have some fears about speaking strangely. This fears make me hard to approach foreigners to get a relationship with them. >> These fears make me have difficulty approaching foreigners to start a relationship with them. But it is the best way to improve my skill... >> Correct! There\'s nothing easy. >> Correct! So I hope that the conversations with you help me a lot for these things. >> So I hope that the conversations with you will help me a lot these things. Take care!>> Correct!<Essay>There aren\'t a lot of practice classes. >> Correct! I said it before, didn\'t I? >> Correct! I learned only theories in a school. >> I only learned theories in a school. It\'s not that useful in a daily life and in an university to study. >> Do you mean: It\'s not that useful in our daily lives and in a university to study. So I think that we could get more chances to practice. >> So I think that we should get more chances to practice.

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