Homework

2015-03-03 · 첨삭 강사 Sophia

학생이 쓴 원문

These are my answers. 1. an 2. X 3. X 4. X 5. a 6. a 7. a 8, the 9. the 10. the This is my diary. I went to the Ggimgilbang with my family last Saturday. Ggimgilbang is the public warm-house that it has bathroom, sauna and restroom. We were bring many things. There are two bottles of beer, two can of coca and some bag of snacks. We were s[이름]p in there and arrived at home last Sunday. We were happy weekend.

강사 첨삭

Hello MR. [이름], I am happy to hear that you had a nice weekend. I think you really had fun because you had a chance to spend your weekend with your wife. You even drank beer together. Anyway, thank you for diligently doing your homework. I hope these homeworks help you improve your English skills. Teacher Sophia   Here are your corrections: These are my answers. >> CORRECT  1. an >> A2. X >> CORRECT  3. X >> A4. X >> AN5. a >> CORRECT  6. a >> AN, AN7. a >> CORRECT  8, the >> NOTHING 9. the >> A10. the >> ANThis is my diary. >> CORRECT  I went to the Ggimgilbang with my family last Saturday. >> My family and I went Ggimgilbang last Saturday.Ggimgilbang is the public warm-house that it has bathroom, sauna and restroom. >> Ggimgilbang is a public warm-house which has bathroom, sauna and restroom.We were bring many things. >> We brought many things.There are two bottles of beer, two can of coca and some bag of snacks. >> We had two bottles of beer, two cans of coca and some bags of snacks.We were s[이름]p in there and arrived at home last Sunday. >> We slept there and we arrived home last Sunday.We were happy weekend. >> We had a happy weekend. OR >> We enjoyed the weekend. OR >> My family and I enjoyed the weekend.

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